Student ID: 07149
Portfolio for Writing IV,
Section 1a
Section 1a
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
| 1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates yy.mm.dd | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words) | Website Reviews: KAIYUKANKAIYUKAN (rewrite) | 08.09.24 08.10.02 | 5 5 | 379 423 | 6 0 | 1 4 | 4 4 | 0 0 |
| Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words) | Essay- I love Milktea!!! | 08.10.12 | 5 | 454 | 0 | 0 | 5 | 0 |
| Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words) | MR 2-01: Important Things That She Taught Me | 08.11.03 | 5 | 516 | 11 | 0 | 3 | 0 |
| Community life 08.11.17 (default length*) | Essay: Life with Dogs | 08.11.15 | 5 | 489 | 2 | 0 | 1 | 0 |
| Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶) | Writing Essay: A Shrine Sacred to SOYBEAN PASTE | 08.12.01 | 3 | 358 | 0 | 0 | 2 | 0 |
| Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶) | Essay: Our Life with Computers | 08.12.13 | 6 | 535 | 0 | 0 | 1 | 0 |
| Totals | ----- | ----- | 34 | 3154 | 19 | 5 | 20 | 0 |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.I think my best essay is Website Review: KAIYUKAN (rewrite). This essay is rewrite essay, so I think it's almost perfect. My friends gave me nice advice! Also I used many colors and put the link in this essay. So I chose it for best essay.
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | --- | --- | --- | --- |
| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | Good Day | 08.08.18 | 36 | friendly "I enjoyed~of you!!, I'm~to Aso!" |
| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | MR 2-01: Important Things That She Taught Me | 08.11.05 | 89 | clever "I think it'll~ story." |
| 2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | MR 2-01: Important Things That She Taught Me | 08.11.05 | 508 | great! "However, I think that is too long~. ~ It will be better!!" |
| 2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 08.11.05 08.11.19 08.11.22 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 274 | so-so, but friendly "Let's get happy together!" |
| 2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | DRIVER'S LICENCE | 08.11.12 | 178 | nice "Just for the record, that was the wiki Vocabulary References page." |
| 2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 08.11.19 08.11.20 08.11.22 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 117 | so-so, but friendly "Oh!!!! I'll buy a cute car, or steal your car! :)" |
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.- In my blog, recent comment display at the top in a sidebar.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- When I get new comment, I feel happy. Comments make me happy!
- I leave comments in other blog, I can communicate with them!
3.0. Book Reviews
Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.My best book review is BR 2-06: Young Cam Jansen and the Dinosaur Game. I think that I wrote a particular explanation, and also there is a picture. I like it.
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
| Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | ○ | |
| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ○ | |
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ○ | |
| 4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ○ | |
| 5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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| 4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ○ | |
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| 4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
| 4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics? | ○ | |
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| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ○ | |
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| 4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ○ | |
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I've not included any media in this semester. | --- | --- |
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.- ...I tried to use many colors in this semester.
- ...I used many kinds of label, so I thought that my blog looking was good.
- ...I put picture in my blog.
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it
Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).- ...I came to like writing than before.
- ...My skill for computer became better.
- ...I wanted to know more about grammer.
6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
- ...Enjoy writing, so your writing skill will be better.
- ...It's good to visit to other bolg. Probably you can get new idea.
- ...In daily life, there are many things which you can write. So you should write even small event!
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Notes:
- This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c (Fall, 2008).
- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
License:
This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).
2 comments:
Hi, Chie! This is Yui.
A happy new year!
You wrote more than 15000 words! It's very nice! I have to write 2000 words from now on.
Your blog is easy to read, because there are a lot of pictures.
Hi, Chie! I'm Mio. Your portfolio was great. You wrote enough book reviews. You include many pictures, aso it looks great. You lso have many labels, it mean you wrote about many kind of blogs!! I think you did good job.
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